You tugged me lovingly,
Inch by inch you proceeded,
You ripped apart my emotions,
My faith in you conceited.
The love we shared now lies,
In modest ashes below,
The smoke disappeared,
But the murder still glows.
The life I dedicated,
So crushed, yet exposed,
Can't erase the inkstains
Thus, you chose to dispose.
My heart is still hanging on,
To the rest of my pages,
The beats come and go,
And each takes ages.
I've tried to stick back,
The tape will always show,
And so will the jagged edges,
For I am now torn...
Comments
So you have written it? Cool...
The poem is depicting a very strong betrayal..and a HOPE...to get the lost things back..or tp perhaps heal back the emotions...So you didn't just wrote it for emotions of this kind??? did you?
:P
made cooler by Sarthak on November 3, 2003 9:18 PM
--- MT ----
I know I shouldn't ask this question here...But U r very LAZY while checking mails... :P
I have uploaded all the CGI files in the CGI-BIN folder, and I have created a new folder named "MT" now which files should be uploaded here...as there are lot of 'em like LIB...and I am getting confused will all this....
Can U gimme a step by step direction for MT...there HELP is too confusing :(
made cooler by Sarthak on November 3, 2003 9:20 PM
I wrote it with the idea of a lot of pain - betrayal, and regret.. for letting someone else tear 'me' - thats the theme of the poem.
And mail me immediately - I think the spamguard put your mail in the junk :P and I never got it... I'll reply back immediately!!!
made cooler by Lime on November 3, 2003 9:37 PM
I hope this is not something from your personal experience! Right?
made cooler by Preet on November 4, 2003 1:31 AM
You know me better than that :) 'course not!
made cooler by Lime on November 4, 2003 5:07 PM
too good man now read mine also,
ITS A SAD N QUITE NIGHT WITH WORDS AS MY SHADE,
I AM WRITIN THIS POEM HOPIN DAT D PAIN WOULD FADE.
WE WERE 2GETHER FOR MANY YEARS,
NOW ALL I CAN FEEL IS A FEAR.
I GAVE ALL I COULD GIVE,
BUT I THINK DIS WAS NOT D WAY U WANTED TO LIVE.
SOMEDAYS BCK A STRONG RELATION WAS THERE,
OUR LUV WAS ONCE GR8 NOTHIN COULD COMPARE.
MY LIFE WILL NEVA B D SAME AGAIN,
NOW THAT U R GONE I'LL B TRAPPED IN D LONLINESS 4EVA UNTILL SOME1 SPECIAL WILL BLOOM INTO MY LIFE AGAIN...
WHAT DO U EXPECT U R D ONLY 1 4 ME?
U TOOK ME FOR GRANTED N THEN U BEG N PLEA.
EVERYTHIN IS DIFFERENT NOW THERES JUS NO MORE FLAMES,
NOW I REALIZE ALL DAT WHICH HAPPENED BETWEEN US WAS A GAME U PLAYED.
U KILLED ME N MURDERED MY LOVE,
AFTER AL DIS U EXPECT ME TO COME?
U SHATTERED MY FEELINGS N EVERYTHIN WAS APART,
U LEFT ME DAT DAY WITH A BROKEN HEART,
THAT TENDER HEART WITH NO SPAREPARTS.
BUT DON THINK ILL CRY 4EVA I LOVE MYSELF TOO MUCH,
BUT YES KNOW DIS U HURTED ME SOOO DAMN MUCH.
I AM SITTIN HERE WITH MY HEAD IN MY HAND,
NOW I HAV LEARNED TO EXPECT N HOW TO UNDERSTAND.
NOW I DO UNDERSTAND DAT REALITY IN PAIN,
WHICH BROUGHT ME TEARS N LEFT ME IN RAIN.
NOW I AM TRYIN N MOVIN ALONG,
BUILDIN MY COURAGE N BECOMIN STRONG.
BUT TODAY ON THIS SAD N QUITE NIGHT,
AS MY DREAMS WENT THROUGH,
I REALIZE MY MISTAKE THAT
I WAS WRONG TO LOVE U....
made cooler by SUPRIYA on January 6, 2004 4:08 PM