I want to live in a house
Thats made of tender leaves
That smells of love and hope
That lives in the grove of trees
I want to drive a car
That revs my senses anew
That follows the limits right
That knows what road to choose
I want to watch television
That shows only purest love
That sings my lady's heart to me
That gives a glimpse of the heavens above
I want to wear those clothes
That no one can critisize
That makes me look more happy
That can contain my soul's size
I want to open that refridgerator
That cools me from inside
That keeps my thoughts fresh
That absorbs the chill down my spine
I want all those material things
That can make me spiritually strong
That can emotionally bind me again
That stay with me all my life long...
Comments
"I want all those material things
that can make me spiritually strong"
Dear dear , I dont believe any spirituality can come from material things howevver close to the heart they might be..
made cooler by Linus on November 27, 2003 5:21 AM
boohooooo...booohoooo :( now you made me cry. That's so touching....Very nice indeed. Those are things that most of us don't wanna do. We're just interested in driving cars with 'kanta laga' in full volume. We're just interested in watching ftv on television. And we're interested in wearing the shgortest and cutest clothes available. That's what we're interested in doing. Let it be, there's no hope. Why don't u send it to some magazine like childrens digest or something. You're sure 2 get it published. :D
made cooler by Rohit on November 27, 2003 11:25 AM
hey...which house r u talking about..Thats made of leaves...hey..please live in a house made of cement...not leaves.....lol...just joking...I liked it.
made cooler by Heartstopper on November 27, 2003 1:54 PM
hey really excellent poem.. really refreshed my mind after really bad day.
made cooler by Dhaval Faria on November 27, 2003 5:31 PM
Sid: Thats exactly my point - seems like you didn't get the poem the way I perceived it :P
Rohit: Child's Digest? Don't think its for children though - its for any mature person to understand and interpret.. got a magazine for that? :P
Kartik: Leaves signifies purity of nature. It also means lightness - no burden of heavy furniture :) The poem has a lot of hidden meanings really.. Thanks!
Dhaval: Why a real bad day man - what went wrong?
made cooler by Lime on November 27, 2003 5:48 PM
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made cooler by Dhaval Faria on November 27, 2003 6:16 PM
I must admit I didnt get the message intended the first time around..But after a careful reading ,I do believe I could get a grasp of the subject.
made cooler by Linus on November 27, 2003 9:54 PM
Sid: I am sure you would eventually - after all you're a fellow live2read author.. btw.. I dont think live2read exists anymore.. does it?
made cooler by Lime on November 28, 2003 4:36 AM
Live2Read has been up and down quite a few times.But I do believe it was there last week.. Gotta check it out
made cooler by Linus on November 29, 2003 10:04 PM